http://tardisjournal.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] tardisjournal.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] who_contest 2013-02-09 04:16 pm (UTC)

Ohhh, you packed a lot into this short piece. I love how you captured the sensual aspects of the food--it made me sad for the Doctor that he can only experience it second-hand. I got chills when you revealed the mystery lady's identity. (Of course I had my suspicions but that's not the same thing!) And I adored powerful, confident River that loves the Doctor so much she won't begrudge him this reunion--in fact, she encourages it. That seems so very her.

Well-done.

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