http://flowsoffire.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] flowsoffire.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] who_contest 2014-12-21 09:58 am (UTC)

Oh, this is really beautiful and heartfelt… I loved the way you portrayed Sarah Jane's very special connection to the Doctor, and her life on Earth after he'd left her—the evolution of her life, and the blindness that slowly progressed in the meantime, while she was too busy to really acknowledge it. The ending was really bittersweet, beautiful. Great job!


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