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Nice job with Amy's thoughts and feelings. I think you nailed them.
One housekeeping comment -- if you put a space between your paragraphs, they're easier to read. It's a small thing, but it can make a really big difference to the reader.
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One housekeeping comment -- if you put a space between your paragraphs, they're easier to read. It's a small thing, but it can make a really big difference to the reader.