http://delacourtings.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] delacourtings.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] who_contest2015-03-09 03:58 pm

Phosphorescence ("Yellow" Entry)

Title: Phosphorescence
Rating: G
Genre: Gen
Word Count: 116
Pairings or Characters: The Doctor (Nine), Rose Tyler
Warnings: None
Summary: Her hair is like a light in the darkness; a beacon, guiding him.



Her hair is like a light in the darkness; a beacon, guiding him. It seems to take on her personality. Golden like the sun to represent her luminous disposition. It's the brightness of it that grabs one's attention first, but, upon even further inspection, it's her wide smile that is the cheeriest, the most warm. It is her heart that inspires, offers hope and kindness, not the colour. There are bits of brown too, at the roots, the perfect accentuator. It seems to represent both what she is (loyal and kind, honest and genuine, ever so sincere) and what she's so reminiscent of as well (of family, of companionship, a sense of stability, permanence, a home).

[identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com 2015-03-09 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahhh, this is gorgeous...sheer beauty in less than 150 words. Thank you for this.

*HUGS*

[identity profile] gallif-migrant.livejournal.com 2015-03-10 02:11 am (UTC)(link)
Very well done, and saying quite a lot in a few sentences. Bravo!

[identity profile] scripsi.livejournal.com 2015-03-11 10:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Short but very sweet!

[identity profile] flowsoffire.livejournal.com 2015-03-16 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Really nice, poetic piece of writing, I love all the things you had her hair represent, all the love, warmth and emotion :) Well done!