Mistaken Deity ("Anachronism" entry)

[locker-monster.livejournal.com]

Title: Mistaken Deity
Rating: G
Genre: General
Word Count: 995
Characters: Donna, Ten
Spoilers: Takes place post-"The Fires of Pompeii"
Warnings: None
Summary: Donna discovers a relic from their adventure in Pompeii.

Mistaken Deity

Comments

[but_can_i_be_trusted]

Very good! I love her uncertainty as to whether they deserve the deification or not; that would probably be such a humbling moment, to realize you'd been pretty much mistaken for a god.

[roseglade.livejournal.com]

Donna!! I love Donna and also I love how you portrayed her. I could really hear her voice talking to the Doctor(you also aced him as well:D).

"Why is the TARDIS smaller than us? We look like giants."

This part made me grin so much!! :D Great job!

[locker-monster.livejournal.com]

Thank you. It was a struggle to find the right tone for Donna's reaction. I could have played it with humour, but having her be freaked out seemed like the most genuine reaction.

[locker-monster.livejournal.com]

Good to know what that the voices sound right. I haven't watched season four in ages. I got so used to writing everything in Twelve's and Clara's voices, so this took me much longer to write. Thanks for reading!

[but_can_i_be_trusted]

That was a good choice. :) For all her sass, it's always good to see the more human side of her, and you've got that down beautifully.